Excuse the title. I realize that the "B" is not very nice at all. The reality is that I stole the phrase from a comment that a reader left on the blog of another cartoonist. I thought it was an awesome compliment to the guys art work. See, I realized that's what I am trying to do....make my pencil my bitch. Hopefully that makes since.
lol
So far I have been given a few helpful hints from a couple of blogger encouraging me in my quest to finish my illustrations. The most obvious, and you would think the most helpful, of advise was for me to storyboard my book. The problem with that is that I'd already done that. Still, I tend to deviate from the story board concept and want to move in another direction. Or the same direction using better technique. Let me give you an example:
This is an example of one of the pages of my book that I was happy with before last week. I had even started the ink the bad boy (my least favorite part of drawing). The idea was there all that was needed was the building behind the wooden fence, the poster I was going to put on the fence, along with a little graffiti and the street sign. It was just right, I was even going to make the grass along the fence be over grown and make the tire lying up against it more realistic. But no, I had to go shopping around blogs and see what other talented arts were doing. I had to go on to YouTube and watch quick sketches being completed by talented individuals. DAMN THIS INTERNET FOR ALLOWING SUCH GREAT TALENT TO BE JUST FINGERTIPS AWAY!
Okay, I'm back. So, as I was saying, I was very much happy with the page above. I knew that inking and then the addition of color would bring it to life and make it pop. Plus, it had the movement that I wanted, sort of, for the book. The problem with the first incarnation of this page was that it was too flat and straight forward. Because I suck at prospective and stuff, the illustrations just sat on the paper and didn't really offer any true movement or excitement and I realized that was how I was approaching the entire book. (That was not going to be exciting for any kid, no matter how good the art work.) The picture above had the movement and the dimensions I was looking for (sort of). At least enough to skate by on and entertain the eyes of the kids I was drawing this book for.
This is the new and final, final illustration for this page of the book. I will not, will not, allow myself to redo this page yet another time. From the shear amount of times I have redone the dang gone page, I could have the whole darn book completed by now.
As you can see I keep some of the background characters from the drawing above. I revisited the woman, taking away her bag of groceries and turning her dress into a short sleeved number and loosing the straps. I added the little girl, running beside him, as a second thought. I thought she brought a little more movement to the page. I love this page and now all that is left is to make all the rest of the art work live up to it (and to stop looking at the blogs of all the damn talented artist around. LOL).
E.W. Forge